Winter250字作文

My name is Yuan Quan. I like winter use l can play in the snow and make a snowman. Winter is white and mam and sister also like winter.I often make a snowman and play in the snow on winter. Sometimes I go shopping with my family.

修改后：
My name is Yuan Quan. I like winter best. Because l can play with the snow and make a snowman. In winter, the world is all white. My mum and sister also like winter. We often make snowmen and have a snowball fight is very interesting.

修改老师：Crystal 老师

五年级:袁泉